Hey yall!
I’ve decided to start putting my work online along with the breakdown of plays. So, it should pretty cool.
I’ll try to make a move on this soon!
Later!
Victor
ps: For now I will just put this short play up.
The 2nd Law of Thermodynamics
By
Victor Torres
Final Draft
2011 vrtorres@indiana.edu
Cast of Characters
Charles Darwin: Tom
Emily Dickinson : Frankie
George C. Scott: Detective
Pete Postlethwaite: Coroner
FORWARD
This is to be read before the play or put into the
program.
“In our youthful years we still venerate and despise
without the art of NUANCE, which is the best gain of
life, and we have rightly to do hard penance for having
fallen upon men and things with Yea and Nay. Everything
is so arranged that the worst of all tastes, THE TASTE
FOR THE UNCONDITIONAL, is cruelly befooled and abused,
until a man learns to introduce a little art into his
sentiments, and prefers to try conclusions with the
artificial, as do the real artists of life. The angry
and reverent spirit peculiar to youth appears to allow
itself no peace, until it has suitably falsified men
and things, to be able to vent its passion upon them:
youth in itself even, is something falsifying and
deceptive. Later on, when the young soul, tortured by
continual disillusions, finally turns suspiciously
against itself—still ardent and savage even in its
suspicion and remorse of conscience: how it upbraids
itself, how impatiently it tears itself, how it
revenges itself for its long self-blinding, as though
it had been a voluntary blindness! In this transition
one punishes oneself by distrust of one’s sentiments;
one tortures one’s enthusiasm with doubt, one feels
even the good conscience to be a danger, as if it were
the self-concealment and lassitude of a more refined
uprightness; and above all, one espouses upon principle
the cause AGAINST “youth.”—A decade later, and one
comprehends that all this was also still—youth!”
The Free Spirit: 31- Nietzsche
2.
PART A
Creation
Lights up. A city stands before us. Rows and rows
of buildings stretch through the perspective of a
proscenium. The nights sky is red.
The action takes place in a dimly lit alley.
Bricks line the walls and give the alley an almost
archaic look.
TOM, a seventeen year old enters. He is wearing
dark clothes. He looks all around him. Afraid.
Tom begins to cough. He looks up into the night
and sees the red sky.
He whispers.
The first text should be read Shakespeareanly.
TOM
Frankie?…Frankie? Frank!…The light is too dim. Come
on Frankie, don’t leave me in the dark…
Off-stage we hear a voice.
FRANKIE
Close your eyes and find me. You’ll see my wave. A
zillion grains of sand, heavy with life,
But filled with air…Ageless in existence.
TOM
Perchance, don’t play games…the skies burn with
fire…
FRANKIE
Ah, ah, ah…one syllable too many. Speak within the
code or sleep underneath the ground…Do as I say and
say as I do. The rules…As a Sentinel-to-be…you
really should be…
TOM
You lie! You just spoke two over the line!
FRANKIE
Too true. Yet. I’m not the one in darkness…
FRANKIE, a seventeen year old leaps behind Tom.
She’s in brighter clothing. She gives Tom a little
nudge.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 3.
Tom jumps.
FRANKIE
Your diction needs work. Thankfully, you still have
more to learn. Keep within the beat…like we
talked…ba bum ba bum ba bum ba bum ba bum…What is
it? You look frightened? By me?
TOM
I…
FRANKIE
Ba bum…
(Pause)
TOM
You didn’t scare me. You gave off a sweet plume,
Drenched in the cliche of stupider men.
FRANKIE
I had no idea this was your scent?! Pardon me, this
aroma is for safe And salient blending, with thick
smoke and…Fire. But I digress. Why are you late?
TOM
Have I not been standing here this past hour?
FRANKIE
Perhaps. Yet I think you are not alone. Your bottom lip
quivers and you’ve displaced The motion of your feet.
Back and forth. Stop.
TOM
Let me guarantee. We are here, alone.
FRANKIE
Stop.
TOM
You were followed up to now. A minor-
FRANKIE
Yet necessary precaution. I see. However, I do not know
why in such Great times of our clan’s success and
volume- Hordes of soldiers, willing to burn their past,
And live off of the visceral entrails Of their own
youthful spirits- now enlist Their services to an
upright command, And strategic will of the burnt image
They wished to destroy. It’s a paradox. An oxymoron, a
paradigm, a lie.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
TOM
(Aside)
I cannot tell if this is a test or If by some strange
means the rumors are true.
Is now the time to be doubtful for our Fools and
enemies to see and conquer? Look into the sky and tell
me you see No change. Tell me you see nothing. Red
streams, Black clouds engulfing the stars and the moon,
the bulge of the night losing perspective. Everlasting
vertigo. This is now.This is what I see. This is what I
see.
FRANKIE
I’m afraid then. You are lost. Inflated. With even
falser dreams than those we chose To burn. I suppose
you were one who did Not make it. For that is how I see
you.You are nothing to me now, but a flat, Dead body;
rising to the surface just A moment. Then. Sinking back
down to hell.
TOM
So strange. I must admit, I had my doubts, But this is
proof of the uncertainty. And insanity. So it would
very Much satiate my will to cure you now.
Tom takes out a gun. Frankie raises her hands.
FRANKIE
Is this a joke? Have I missed the party?
TOM
Your activity has been strange lately. The Clan has
taken notice. However,Your work tonight seems to
suggest other-
FRANKIE
Wise of you to think on it. But you and I are one in
the same. Split from the same Seed.
TOM
You’re nuts.
FRANKIE
Funny, but no. I mean sincerity, We are from the same
muscle contraction. Every tissue, fiber, cell: is both
you, And me. We are compelled by the same voice.
TOM
Why then, do you act as though you lost your Mind?
This text should sound locomotive.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 5.
FRANKIE
Me? My mind? I, my mind? Not I, my mind?! Damn you! I
lost my mind?! Forgive me for breaking formality.
Unlike many others, I give respect. Call me a liar or
whatever Killing me will Lead you to Nothing Me?!
TOM
Why do you assume I don’t give respect? My time has
been spent in service. Doing what I could to hold, To
protect and honor, To learn. I…I believe That…
This text should be a rhythmic poetry slam.
FRANKIE
Then let me be frank. I dreamed last night…
TOM
You had a dream?
FRANKIE
Yes Tom. A dream. I dreamed about the world. I saw the
Earth. I saw everything. I saw humans. Walking in rows,
walking far and speaking tongues of “hello’s,”
“goodbyes,” and “this weekend doesn’t work Phil.” I
watched the kids sipping espresso and discovering The
Kinks. Smoking marijuana for the first time in a small
room. The naivety of believing the female orgasm to be
a myth. Sitting in large moon cut circles reveling in
the cigarette burns and razor blades of adolescence. I
saw their hope and I hoped for them. Because they had
no idea. That’s not all Tom. I saw the parents. The
middle aged. The “god I hope fifty is the new
thirty-five” generation. I watched them change channels
and “wear heels” under the notion that success is a
measurable and tangible entity out there in the world.
These people were on their last peg of “this year I
will be famous”- or worse, they find out the truth. Too
old to change the world, too young to realize it’s all
bullshit. They sat and waited. They figured themselves
too old to fix anything. After all, “everything was
different twenty years ago.” They sat and waited.
Distracted by the innocence of helplessness. Throwing
paper towards the church. They sat and waited.
Distraction. They waited until they could sleep soundly
six feet under, only to discover that god doesn’t
exist. I saw the old. The once stock yard workers in
blue collars. The Sunday catalogers of Sears Roebuck.
The generation of clean meat and American made
porcelain. They lived under the city and past houses.
They lived for nostalgia and bland foods. Too young to
let go, too old to not be dead. Everything they once
knew has died or is dying. Friends last lifetimes, but
people eventually die. I saw them all, and their cities
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 6.
FRANKIE (cont’d)
and countries. I saw their World Wars, their Pearl
Harbor, their Indies, Agent Orange, 9/11. I saw them
rushing to be know. Rushing to replace knowledge with
information. They couldn’t stop. It was all too fast.
They lead this life for many years. By the end, they
knew that breathing oxygen was needed for survival, but
they couldn’t remember why. They knew that water turns
into ice, but they couldn’t remember why. They knew
that Hitler was evil, but they couldn’t remember why.
And in one second. I saw it disappear. I saw every
device, tool, and energy on Earth disappear. The world
cried out in shock, panic, running, killing. Foolish
people. Don’t you see? Had they known the Universe is
not static, but curved, maybe they would have seen it.
That the Earth, in that moment of complete horror, was
still spinning. Perfectly on it’s axis. An object
seemingly in perpetual motion that holds just as much
trivial nature as the lost ego casters on Earth. A
small child could be burned, and the Universe would
yield no reaction. Differences only in nature. Nothing
else. For the Universe is an engineer, not a idealist.
They did not know. They did not know that oxygen into
the lungs gets it into the blood stream, keeping us
alive. They did not know that water crystallizes at
thirty-two degrees Fahrenheit after being in the
asymmetrical form of liquid. They just didn’t know.
They don’t know…it’s all irrelevant. The Universe has
created a joke above all, and it named this joke
humanity. For only humanity can attain knowledge by
acknowledging they know nothing at all.
A gunshot is heard. Tom has shot Frankie. Frankie
falls to the ground.
TOM
You have disappointed me my master. Your belief stems
into unrealistic Chaos. But you forget within chaos Is
order. Order can only lead to Chaos can only lead to
order.
FRANKIE
Good. You have surpassed my expectation.
Go. Teach. Live out the end of your life. The chapels
that sear as we speak, burn please in your honor…
Frankie dies. Tom runs offstage.
FRANKIE
Just one more thing…
Tom runs on stage.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 7.
TOM
Just one more thing?
FRANKIE
812-855-4848…if you have anymore questions…
TOM
Forgive me for my ignorance…
FRANKIE
It is the 11 digit special number of my once “security”
social.
TOM
11? You’ve given me a phone…
FRANKIE
I have given you a social security number!!!…If you
should ever need
anymore…information…guidance…truth…
TOM
I am afraid to admit that I am very confused.
FRANKIE
Than you are as lost as I imagined…It doesn’t hurt
you know. Being dead.
TOM
But you’re alive.
FRANKIE
I am dead.
TOM
You are not yet dead!
FRANKIE
No one likes that show.
TOM
What?
FRANKIE
I’m dead Tom accept it and move on. You shot me moments
ago… I am beginning now to fade into the ground. Soon
I will be a part of the Universe that cradles
my…funny…I want to say soul…but it’s deeper. It
doesn’t hurt. It’s like slowly…falling…asleep…but
with a lot of unnecessary pain. Slowly…falling…
Frankie dies (this time for real.) Tom stands
confused. He then runs offstage.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 8.
BLACK OUT
9.
PART B
Creation Again
Detective and Coroner stand over a body of a dead
Frankie. The body is laid onto a metal table. The
room is all silver. They stand quietly as Coroner
begins cutting through the abdomen of the man.
CORONER
Okie doke. Examining subject 812-855-4848
DETECTIVE
Okie doke.
CORONER
The trick is…to go directly down the sternum. You got
to be careful with the ribs though. Break a few of
those and lose evidence. All right. I’m going to open
it up. You might wanna step back a little. The bacteria
in her organs have already begun eating her inside.
She’ll be a little gassy.
DETECTIVE
Thought it looked distended.
CORONER
Yeah, well, even for a dedicated radical, her shit
still stinks.
Detective opens the chest completely from the
incision. The ribs are forced up and out, like
wings coming out of his chest.
DETECTIVE
Oh my. Yes it does.
CORONER
Alright. We’re looking for some deterioration in this
area. Lets get a look at the lungs here.
DETECTIVE
Did you ever see that flyer they had up last week?
CORONER
They uh…city barbecue?
DETECTIVE
Yeah. What kind of shit is that? I’m unionized. Give me
a raise if you want to appreciate me.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 10.
CORONER
Well unfortunately your just a “politician with a gun.”
DETECTIVE
Haha! Politician with a gun, I like that. I guess I’ll
have to go.
CORONER
Well, you don’t want them spend all your money on a
party you won’t go to. Here we go…
Coroner pulls really hard on something inside the
body. Detective holds the body down so that
Coroner can grab out of the body a lung. He
examines it and nods.
CORONER
Found the culprit.
He holds up a bullet.
DETECTIVE
Well, well. That’s second degree murder. Might have a
raise after all!
CORONER
Well, don’t forget me okay. I verified it.
DETECTIVE
You and Mary should come over for drinks Saturday.
CORONER
Yeah. We’d like that. Is there anything else you need
to see?
DETECTIVE
That’s all I need. You can do the report?
CORONER
Yup.
DETECTIVE
One thing. Her id said he was a donor.
CORONER
And?
DETECTIVE
Where does a chick like her go off to?
CORONER
Penis enlargements. The industry loves cadavers. Face
lifts, nose jobs, penis enlargements…
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 11.
DETECTIVE
Really?
CORONER
Skin graft human hide. Makes great foreskin.
DETECTIVE
I’ll keep that in mind. See you at PTA.
Softly in the background John Lennon’s “My Mummy’s
Dead” should be playing softly. At the middle of
the Detective’s line.
CORONER
Good bye.
Detective exits.
Song continues until it’s over. Coroner is still
standing over the body. He continues to examine
her body until the lights go out.
BLACKOUT
12.